LEAP League says...
Hello there blog readers! Just gonna give you guys a progress report... So we're on our 5th post. Also, LEAP League has had 2 field assignments given by our boss, The Urban Guru. But since this is the second to the last post for our business with the Urban Guru, we would like to do it differently...
THE MADE-UP STORY OF LEAP LEAGUE:
It all started when LEAP League got an urgent message from the president of the Philippines it says:
Unfortunately, the entire country is suffering from power crisis since global prices of oil plummeted to a level no one can ever imagine. The only solution that can resolve the power crisis is opening the Bataan Nuclear Power Plant (BNPP) that had been mothballed already for the past 30 years. Knowing that BNPP is just an 8-minute ride from the 7 km-long Morong Beach which is the nesting place of the endangered marine turtles, should I still allow the opening of the BNNP? So I am asking you for help! Just pretend that you're in my position and your decision will affect the entire country! I have sent someone to record your answers.
Sincerely,
The President of the Philippines
The messenger asked us some questions which were:
1. Will you allow the opening of BNPP? Justify your answer.
2. What are the pros and cons of opening BNPP to all stakeholders?
When the messenger finished he wrote back to the president
1. Will you allow the opening of BNPP? Justify your answer.
2. What are the pros and cons of opening BNPP to all stakeholders?
When the messenger finished he wrote back to the president
Dear Mr. President,
Good day! I have finished interviewing the LEAPers individually and none of them know each other's answer. This letter contains all their answers and reflections. Hope you solve your problem!
"Opening the BNPP? AYAW KO!!! First of all, I said before that I am not in favor of harnessing power from nuclear energy; since, it has more potential harm if ever earthquakes, typhoons or other natural calamities hit the area of the power plant. But to think of it as a good thing, it can help us develop our country economically and technologically. Its 623 MW electrical capacity could have provided at least 10% of the present power requirements for the Luzon grid. With a well developed technological sector, the Pawikan Conservation Center may have an easier time in breeding and handling sea turtles. But with a well-developed technological sector it will also be easier to catch and kill these beautiful and many others of God's creation. The decision is yours Mr. President, you just have my answer: NO!" - LegoMasterBuilder DEATH IN THE ENERGY!
OPEN!!!
"Ain't no way I'm doing that! Mr. President, the BNPP poses a threat to animals. However, on our journey to the BNPP, we were told that it is safe to use and that it can be well managed. They are very careful in handling the power plant to prevent accidents from happening, they'll double their carefulness if they open the plant. It is considered to be one among the robustly-built nuclear power station in the world, and more advance in design and younger than more than half of the operating nuclear power plants in the United States of America, the BNPP was designed to withstand the highest postulated earthquake in the Luzon island at ground acceleration value of 0.4G or Intensity 8 in the Richter Scale. And for animals... well I can't really think of benefits for the animals. But you get what happens if we open the plant. But I still wouldn't open it. Why? Because animals will be affected by the radiation released by the power plant. Also the Pawikan Conservation Center is not that far! What will happen to the sea turtles!?!? Mr. President, please don't open the plant..."- PlausibleRorschach
Sincerely,
The Messenger
So that's the end of our made-up story. Catch us 'til our next post and hope you've learned something from all this. LIKE US ON FACEBOOK or something... :D :D :D :D.
P.S. We are not trying to predict the future...
1. http://www.napocor.gov.ph/index.php/bataan-nuclear-power-plant
5 comments:
Hai there LEAPERS! I just wanted to say-GOOD JOB!I really really really really (infinite really's)LOVE what you guys and gurhls did! So interesting and can really motivate meh:) XD
-Bella-
P.S.-I am not evaluating your blog
P.P.S.-I'm from Bazingang and just wanted to encourage and give commentsXD
P.P.P.S.-GOOD JOB (once more)
Hello LEAP League! Today, I will be grading your post, and will try to be unbiased as much as I can. So, now with your grade...
Content - 10/10
Coherence - 5/5
Creativity - 5/5
Voice - 5/5
Mechanics - 4/5
Text Layout - 3/5
Graphics & Multimedia - 3/5
Intellectual Honesty - 5/5
TOTAL: 40/45
The blog was indeed interesting! I was entertained for the whole time however, there were some grammatical errors such as "and the PAWIKAN raise", it's race, and I suggest not overusing capitals and exclamation marks. It provides a bit too loud voice. Also, I noticed the amount of unnecessary gifs and pictures. It was creative, but personally I thinks it's a tad bit too much.
To add to this, keep in mind the when the BNPP opens, it wouldn't immediately kill the turtles, and that there would be time to move the center somewhere else. That's more of a personal opinion, so I won't be deducting anything however, you're layout was a bit cluttered. It is also recommended that you don't indent, as it is a bit unnecessary.
Nevertheless, It was a really good post! Just try to keep the gifs and pictures on-topic, and try to improve you're layout! Good Job!
Hi Leapers! I really enjoy reading your blog. The layout is pleasing to the eye and your write-ups are entertaining and very informative. Great job! I'm awed by the amazing capabilities that God has entrusted to you. Keep it up and keep on blogging even after this project commences. As the Lego Movie has it, "Everything is AWESOME!!!" - Tita Maloi
So what was the President's final decision?
'Twas a cliffhanger. Here is your score:
Content - 8/10
Coherence - 5/5
Creativity - 5/5
Voice - 4/5
Mechanics - 4/5
Text Layout - 5/5
Graphics & Multimedia - 5/5
Intellectual Honesty - 5/5
Comments - 10/10
Peer - 40/45
TOTAL: 91/100
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